Pitch feedback

From our feedback we were given advice on our music on good British grime artists like Skepta since we said we wanted artists to go with the young criminal groups in the scene when the main character is getting bullied, taking this on we looked more for music which sounded like this and fitted in with the young British grime genre. 

We were also given feedback on how to show our main characters powers, to shake desks and move objects offscreen to make it seem as if it is the main characters. When cracking a computer screen a lot of people wanted to know how we were going to do it, we had the idea of putting a picture of a cracked screen on the computer and with editing make it look like the main character did it, Lenya was also going to see if she could just get a cracked computer from her dads work which would be better.                                                                                                                                                          

We were also asked to elaborate on our storyboard which is in another blog, to show more shot types that we'll use and give more information on what the opening will look like.